persuasive writing

Persuasive Writing

Purpose: Persuade Mr Elder/ Mr Moore whether there there should be refection or not.

Audience: Mr Elder/ Mr Moore

LG Punctuation

Think about:

Using examples,

Offering better solutions,

Using strong, persuasive

language .  

 

Reflection you must of thought people would hate it well me and my buddies quit like it they think it is entertaining. All they do is laugh and muck around.

I personally feel like there should be a worse punishment.

Children liking reflection that may seem crazy but really isn't because when I had reflection we were in a group so….                     …. We we made each over laugh smile and muck around. We need something that will stop us going back again.

If the punishment isn't severe the people that go to reflection will want to back there go over and over so in total what did we learn severe consequence is best.

Back in the day they had the strap and many over harmful over consequence but once served never again did they did it So in total they learnt their lesson.

So now i’ve told you I hope this encourages you to do better punishment and separate the laughing goofs.