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Wednesday, November 2, 2016

Narrative writing

Narrative writing

In the wild he is a man of his word. The man's life is fragile like the bomb that hit it. All the radiation is on john. John’s town was once happy before the war.

People scream of ache, john hiding in an alleyway he mourned for help. But what he got was not planned a rebellion…

… “We attack at the heart, there base camp”. John was horrified of what he did leading to the capital of there own country.

The small group of seven made it to the city without harm they salvaged what they could to kill any man in there way.

The times past from day to day the cities are blooming with hope but johns old town will remain ruins lost in the world.      

Monday, October 17, 2016

Writing

Purpose: describe a picture in a moment of time

Audience:Blind person

LG: Elaborate in detail

SoS:-
  • A minimum of 5 adjectives
  • A minimum of 5 adverbs
  • At least 2 similes
  • Elaboration minimum of 6 sentences

As i stare my eyes sink into my soul my hands shake anxiously.the walls of the house burnt to crispy charcoal. The dimming sky makes me run into paranoia, hearing things , seeing dark black shadows. This house was  a happy family home. But now it’s a horror house. Its like im in a dream world.     


 


Tuesday, October 11, 2016

elaboration writing

The was beautiful with the clouds changing colour.

: The sun burst its last rays beaming into the moody sky. The golden glow is embarrassing the orange then the orange is twisting to pink from that it deepens to purple. From the reflection of the water the sky is dark as night with a faint golden red glitter twinkling with the calm steady waves. The elderly couple watch the rocky mountains storm into a solute including them on the jetty.    

Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Dogonews

           Thor would really approve well i think not.


in king tut's tomb the found to daggers on made out of iron but the archaeologist say no its made out of  meteorite iron there not the same thing  from what i know. they say they didn't know the technology for it but most ruins are not completely together so  but where on earth would they find a meteorite iron in a full clump so really it could be that or not so thats for you to decide.

Tuesday, September 6, 2016

kiwi kids news

Kiwi kids news

First of all they need way more security, any way why cows sheep provide more so the cows got stolen wouldn't that be easy to spot as the farmer watches

The herd it wouldn't be that easy to not spot it. The farmer probably lazy so he falls asleep stupid. He should at least check first before bed dummy unless he does have miles of land. What should happen in the future is cameras in areas by road by doing this it will cause less stealing if it ever happens again.

Tuesday, August 30, 2016

how to get away with murder

How to get away with murder

LG:Use some variety of structure in my sentences
S.O.S: Use types and lengths in my
sentences   

In this report I will be telling you about how to get away a bloodcurdling murder. So try not spill the blood while framing someone, you don’t even know but remember the only way of being successful is by leaving no evidence at all.

Blood is one of the most reliable the piece of evidence that detectives will  look for, because then they will have some blood samples and that’s not good at all. So the best killing no blood spilled is suffocation. Simply add a big black bag over their head and tie firmly. By doing this it cuts the air around them. So they slowly start breathing carbon dioxide and die no blood and so easy.


Some people say framing your actions so they get the blame may seem hard but it’s not really. One of the ideas of framing is simply just blaming that they did it. The harder way is fingerprints, taking their blood somehow from them By them getting the blame that means you can carry on with your life. Knowing you, yourself has done something unthinkable by getting away with murder.

Evidence is your weakness by leaving evidence you the murderer gets caught and gets sent jail but a mass murderer can get sentenced to death.
Blood, fingerprints, cameras are evidence the capture the scene of the murder and after that they find where you went.
 
 


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